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Far away
This ship has taken me far away
Far away from the memories
Of the people who care if I live or die

Starlight
I will be chasing a starlight
Until the end of my life
I don't know if it's worth it anymore

Hold you in my arms
I just wanted to hold you in my arms

My life
You electrify my life
Let's conspire to ignite
All the souls that would die just to feel alive

I'll never let you go
If you promise not to fade away
Never fade away

Our hopes and expectations
Black holes and revelations
Our hopes and expectations
Black holes and revelations

"I give permission for Cityscapes-Club to display this deviation."

Critiques


:iconserphius:
I think this is a solid piece with a ton to like, but also a ton to work on.

First off, your use of color is amazing. I can't tell if this is simply a long exposure or an HDR (I'm hoping for the former), but you've really captured a visually appealing photograph here. The light and colors are balanced very well, and I love the richness of the purple. The post-processing on this is great.

My main issue on the negative side would be with the cropping. At first glance, I liked what you did here, but the longer I look at it, the more unsure I am of the endpoints and angles here. Perhaps try a shot with the bridge coming from the side of the photograph rather than the corner, thus taking out some of the dead water space at the bottom. Maybe also try with and without the buildings on the far left. It may enhance the image or it may not, but there's definitely a framing issue that's bugging my eye without being really specific.

Overall a great shot of a beautiful cityscape.
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:icontomatobisque:
Definately a gorgeous photo<3

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Please visit the gallery of ~Hyuuga-Nyamo, a very talented artist c:

I'm obsessed with Shikamaru.
:iconstarlightspell:
Glad you like it! :)

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When words become unclear,
I shall focus with photographs.
-Ansel Adams

:iconvelitchko:
love the focus on the buildings in the background :)
awesome exposure

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:iconstarlightspell:
Yay! Thanks :D

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When words become unclear,
I shall focus with photographs.
-Ansel Adams

:iconindi-is-conan:
Very nice!! where is it?

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:iconstarlightspell:
Miami :D

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When words become unclear,
I shall focus with photographs.
-Ansel Adams

:iconindi-is-conan:
:)

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People's opinions are just that, opinions, make sure your opinion is the one you take the most heed of.
:iconcupcakecannibalism:
featured [link]

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Drop the dagger and laugh at the blood on your hands, Romeo.
:iconstarlightspell:
Thankies!!! :)

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When words become unclear,
I shall focus with photographs.
-Ansel Adams

Details

April 8
4.6 MB
129 KB
1024×608

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Canon
Canon EOS 5D
15/1 second
F/8.0
24 mm
320
Apr 7, 2009, 10:44:03 PM

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